Oh, a male stripper, is it? xD I'm a bit curious as to the rhythm on the second and fifth lines, because they are both on 10 syllables whereas line 1 is only eight (at least when I try to count them) and I feel a bit thrown off my balance when trying to read it out loud. I'm certainly no expert on limericks, but.. I don't know, just a thought. The stingy king seems like a nice enough person though xD
Yes it is :). Hmm.. I know, it was really hard to find the words. But I managed to read it out loud a couple of times but I guess I had to be really quick to make it fit ;). I'll have to see what to do about it... But I really like it the way it is :P. And yes, I believe the king is a nice fellow ;).
Funny limerick ;) it's creative and has some really good rhymes. I'm not an expert in limericks but to me the rhytm sounded alright when I was reading it out loud.
Oh, a male stripper, is it? xD
SvaraRaderaI'm a bit curious as to the rhythm on the second and fifth lines, because they are both on 10 syllables whereas line 1 is only eight (at least when I try to count them) and I feel a bit thrown off my balance when trying to read it out loud.
I'm certainly no expert on limericks, but.. I don't know, just a thought. The stingy king seems like a nice enough person though xD
Yes it is :).
SvaraRaderaHmm.. I know, it was really hard to find the words. But I managed to read it out loud a couple of times but I guess I had to be really quick to make it fit ;). I'll have to see what to do about it... But I really like it the way it is :P.
And yes, I believe the king is a nice fellow ;).
Funny limerick ;) it's creative and has some really good rhymes. I'm not an expert in limericks but to me the rhytm sounded alright when I was reading it out loud.
SvaraRadera/Jenny A
Very funny limerick! Good ryhmes :)
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