fredag 15 juli 2011

Assignment 3, Ode


Ode to Writing

Oh, heavenly creativity of words in motion
Inside gleaming ideas of remarkable notion
Engravings on pages of eternal yearning
And vivid hearts which are constantly burning

Oh, heavenly custodian of dreams in subtraction
Seize the words captured in total attraction 
Pages filled by an intense and greedy hand 
Beyond imagination and expectations they expand

Oh, heavenly master of thoughts in code
Our desires and dreams you have bestowed
Too intense to ignore these lifelong vocations
Oh, take them with you – all these divine creations

5 kommentarer:

  1. A beautiful ode, to my (admittedly, not that big) experience. I especially like how you start each new strophe with the same two words. Nice rhymes too! :)

    SvaraRadera
  2. Thanks :). I really enjoyed writing it. I think I'm going to specialize in odes ;D.

    SvaraRadera
  3. Beautiful ode! You use a painting language wich makes the ode alive and touching. Good work!

    /Jenny A

    SvaraRadera
  4. Very good ode to something you obviously love, writing!
    Elin Boström

    SvaraRadera
  5. Really beautiful Ode! It's very creative. Good work!

    SvaraRadera